JJGamez64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Save the Night]

Great job! Proud of you for getting this far and submitting it, I know what a perfectionist you are.
Could you imagine if this was playable 👀

gatekid3 responds:

It lacks to many crucial sprites to be made playable unfortunately... Like walking.

Thanks JJ. I almost risked it not being done in time again.

[Floursack animation exercise]

I think even the most basic animation for the ocean would add so much life to this. It feels like more of a desert when the waves don't move.

Jenny-Jinya responds:

Thank you so much :) as for the background, because it is my firsty with animate I wanted to focus on the character and not overwhelm or confuse myself with the background haha. I aprecciate the critique tho :) A little bit of movement wouldn't have hurt I guess

[Magic is simple]

The sound and concept are very good! And the animation is pretty good for your first one :)
Adding a bit more impact effects to certain things would improve this, like embers coming off of the fire, sparks coming from where the lightning strikes, and shards of ice crashing when the ice falls down.

GrayNox responds:

Thank you, in the future I hope to become better.